There were enchanting colours one on other, merging into each other.
Pink white fumes were coming up,like filling the wine in cup.
And cool breeze was patting my back,telling me I’ve filled your every gap.
I saw a chirping bird, coming far from the dirt.
There were falling tears, trying to settling down my fears.
Then a rain drop fell in the sea, made my worries flee.
My eyes caught that glance, provoked me to give it another chance.
My heart was repeating a verse, you got the lord of universe.
If i had wings i would’ve fly, in that pink wide sky.
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Areeba khan
I write captivating novels and poetry.
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