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The pink sky

A hope

By Areeba khanPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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There were enchanting colours one on other, merging into each other.

Pink white fumes were coming up,like filling the wine in cup.

And cool breeze was patting my back,telling me I’ve filled your every gap.

I saw a chirping bird, coming far from the dirt.

There were falling tears, trying to settling down my fears.

Then a rain drop fell in the sea, made my worries flee.

My eyes caught that glance, provoked me to give it another chance.

My heart was repeating a verse, you got the lord of universe.

If i had wings i would’ve fly, in that pink wide sky.

vintagesurreal poetrysad poetrynature poetrylove poemsinspirationalfact or fictionchildrens poetry
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About the Creator

Areeba khan

I write captivating novels and poetry.

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  • HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)about a year ago

    Great storytelling inside this Piece ✨💖😉👍💯

  • Hassan Mustafaabout a year ago

    Well written… and a fantastic thought..always have been proud of you…keep up the good work👍

  • Moiezabout a year ago

    Keep going good work 👍

  • Neha Khanabout a year ago

    Well written!! 💯

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