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The Peak Is Yours

Parents' wishes are the same.

By Jason Ray Morton Published 2 years ago 1 min read
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Image by mollyroselee from Pixabay

Rise like a winged one

soaring to mountains so high

fly my child, my light

childrens poetrynature poetry
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Jason Ray Morton

I have always enjoyed writing and exploring new ideas, new beliefs, and the dreams that rattle around inside my head. I have enjoyed the current state of science, human progress, fantasy and existence and write about them when I can.

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  • Julie Buchyabout a year ago

    Embodies parenthood perfectly! Beautiful.

  • Aw this one was gorgeous! Subscribed and hearted :)

  • KJ Aartila2 years ago

    A gorgeous tribute to parenthood and the hopes for our children. :)

  • Max Russell2 years ago

    I loved the closing to the haiku. Well done!

  • C. H. Richard2 years ago

    All we wish for our children so beautifully stated.

  • sleepy drafts2 years ago

    Oh, my heart! I love this so much. Beautiful and full of such sentiment.❤️

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Loving it!!! Nature & Children a winning combination!!!

  • Misty Rae2 years ago

    Beautiful, I think that's what we all want for our kids.

  • Angel Whelan2 years ago

    Perfectly captures my feelings for my kids.

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    This was so lovely and sweet!

  • Very well done!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Beautifully done.

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