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The Ocean through five senses

Sensational

By Robbie CheadlePublished 12 months ago 1 min read
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Picture caption: Knysna Heads, Western Cape, South Africa by Robbie Cheadle

Sight

Angry grey

Sullen and moody

Breast heaving

Tears running

Hands beating a frenzied tune

Sharing soul’s torment

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Water gleams

Reflecting blue sky

And white clouds

Tinged with pink

Morning sun welcomes the day

Bright salutation

Sound

Wave crashes

Rain smashes and pounds

Unwelcome

Visitor

Sic’s itself on calm ocean

Changing its nature

Taste

Fresh fried fish

Salt encrusted chips

Dipped in white

Vinegar

The taste of childhood days spent

Paying on the shore

Smell

Salty tang

Scent comes before sight

Ocean smell

Front running

Provoking memories of

Sunscreen and hot sand

Touch

Salt crystals

Encrust my dry eyes

Peering from

Wind-burnt face

Wet from briny ocean spray

Reminds me I’m alive

By Robbie Cheadle

nature poetry
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About the Creator

Robbie Cheadle

Robbie Cheadle loves to create in a variety of mediums including words, cake, fondant, charcoal, and oil pastels. She enjoys writing fantasy stories for children, poetry, and paranormal stories for adults in historical settings.

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  • Amjad Ateih Dib10 months ago

    Great work don't stop keep going

  • Great piece ❤️😉

  • D.L. Finn12 months ago

    I love how you weaved the five senses into these poems o a sea shore visit.

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