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The Ocean's Humble Journey

- From Insignificant to Immense

By Dawnxisoul393artPublished about a month ago 1 min read

Unfathomable black and blue, the depths below

Mysteries untold, where currents ebb and flow

Yet rising from the shadows, a boundless gold

The sun-kissed surface, its grandeur untold

Broad and powerful, the ocean's mighty swell

Waves crashing, thunderous, a watery knell


But peer beyond the foaming, cresting spray

And a humble truth emerges, plain as day

Each drop, so small, so fragile in its own right

Helpless against the forces, day and night

Tossed and turned by winds and tides unseen

The ocean's true essence, serene and clean


For all its vast expanse, its towering might

The ocean is composed of humble, white

Droplets, each one a testament to the whole

Reminding us of life's delicate, fragile role

In the face of nature's raw, unbridled force

We find solace in the humble water's course


Each drop, a testament to resilience true

Weathering the storm, emerging anew

So let us stand in awe of the ocean's power

But never forget the humbled droplets that flower

Into a mighty sea, a force to behold

Reminding us all, our strength lies not in gold

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Dawnxisoul393art, an illustrator and designer couple living on a remote island in Hong Kong.

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