The note
by Michèle Nardelli
Fold it
one time
up and over,
red kiss for the seal.
Love in a note.
Ear mark this time,
the day you said,
"Take my hand,
even if you are not sure,"
read it here...love and hope,
set bold and neat on the page.
About the Creator
Michèle Nardelli
I write...I suppose, because I always have. Once a journalist, then a PR writer, for the first time I am dabbling in the creative. Now at semi-retirement I am still deciding what might be next.
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Dear Michele - One of our VillageBucket Authors asked me to read some of your stories, for some tips as to how to best tell a 'Childrens' Story; stand in line for royalties. As I scroll through your presentations *I've subscribed with pleasure. Although way out of my wheelhouse, I've just finished the sketches as the co-writer and will publish our 1st Childrens story in April I'm just a retired legal writer morphed into a self described 'Goof Writer' nothing more; not into contests or awards; fun at this life stage as you've said in your bio. So nice that we can relate to writers all over the globe from this platform. My Best, j.in.l.a. Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Village Community
This was sweet and lovely! Such a wonderful poem!
Simple but beautiful ❤