
In East Tennessee
College students eager to impress
Or desperate for adventure
Will defy curfews
Take secret dates into
Packed cars and drive
Down back roads
Through dark woods
To trespass the secured fence
Of a local mine
Whose powdered surface of
Silent sand and stacked mounds
Glowing with unearthed minerals
In the lunar light of darkness
Resemble a downed moon.
They must sneak in
Become aliens themselves
To walk upon that world
Inverted beings below a natural satellite
Pretending to be
No longer of this earth
Bouncing to mimic lost gravity
Speaking as if in a vacuum.
With the stars at their head
They place their feet deep
In the dust leaving their mark
Then sit on distant hills
Like starry voyagers
Where lovers place their hands
Together as gently
As the moon landing
Hearing their own mission control
Guiding them
Nearer release
For it is here
In the dust strewn hours
Before class or the waking sun
They finally allow themselves
To become explorers
About the Creator
Kincaid Jenkins
Author of "Drinking With Others: Poetry by the Pint" available at https://redhawkpublications.company.site/Drinking-With-Others-Poetry-by-the-Pint-p470423761 and for purchase on Amazon.
Instagram: kincaidjenkins103
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Remarkable. Very remarkable. I would have loved to have seen the moon landing live. But it was 1969. I wasn't born yet.
Nice. Very well written. I love the imagery.
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Love it!
An excellent narrative poem here. Sounds like an interesting way to pass the time.
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