Waves constrict the boat with astounding weight
on an unbalanced due course,
as it wagers with the hope
that this test will not weaken its life upon this journey.
The imminent destruction of its hull rests in the delicate
strand of thread a Moirai sister caresses between her flesh,
a sharp slit that will beckon the starboard end to kiss the
salty earth of the sea below.
What is the reason of peril for which the ship must endure,
plight after plight?
For what grim hand sways the marionette that dooms
a demure pinnace upon treacherous waters
without anguish thought for any
asylum?
Yet, lambent refuge cast a sanguine spirit upon the
labored frames of the ship.
The beacon of light,
a maritime notion of amenity,
helps guide the craft
home.
For as the ship settles in its harbor of comfort,
it shall mean it is Safe.
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Joan Crow
sharing the stories of all the voices in my head | milwaukee
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Beautifully written and great imagery. 🙂
Good effort. I love poems and stories of the sea.
Good job! Everyone who sets sail on the sea wants to return home safe and sound. It isn't only those on a ship, too.
I love metaphors. Well written.
This was brilliant! Loved the imagery you've used! Well done!
This is great. Well done.
I really like the story-like approach you took to this. Well done!
You should be very proud of this. Top notch work