The Legend of Benfadden Forest
After a dream
In the forest of Benfadden
Where the trees grow green and gladden
All the folk of Farrow Falls,
Stands a house whose shutters sadden
Any child who durst to call.
For, beyond its garden wall,
Tis said is magic made to madden.
Thus much the folk at Farrow stayed
At home, and only rarely played
Near the house whose shutters spoke
Of secrets, wicked, in the shade
Of trees all sinister – the oak
Whose gnarled bark could choke
The breath from any boy or maid.
But of the folk of Farrow, one
Known commonly as Robert’s son,
(Who was the miller of the town)
One day, without a word, begun
To take him, with his poesy, down
To where the golden trees had grown
And there he wrote new rhymes he spun.
And in Benfadden forest he
Carved all his poems on a tree
And signed his name upon the bark
As ‘Michael Robertson’, with glee;
And then when it was nearly dark,
He’d wind his homeward way and mark
His lessons very carefully.
Thus no one was the wiser when
His friends were playing in the glen
And Michael stole into the grove
And made himself a little den
Out of the trees he learned to love;
And then, he heard a collar dove
And knew no sound as sweet by men.
And, listening, carefully he went
Where’er his ear – ever bent
Unto the sound the dove had made
Which he believed the forest sent
Until he came upon a glade
Which made him glad, and so he prayed
Although he knew not what it meant.
Then, just beyond this open space,
He spied a different sort of place:
A wall of bricks he seemed to spy
So with a jump his legs did race
And, looking up into the sky
He realised he knew not why
He felt compelled to move with haste.
But as he nearer drew, he seemed
To recognise something he’d dreamed
(Or, perhaps, he’d only heard
And that his memory had gleaned
A grain of gossip from a word
Mispoken). Nothing else was stirred
But Michael’s heart which ever teemed.
The stillness drew him deeper in
And as he breathed, the air was thin,
But still he would not slow his pace;
Indeed, he quickened, yet again,
Till he was standing at the place
He saw; and how afeared his face
Became – and then he heard the din;
For such a sound he had not heard
It seemed a clamour – not a bird
Was singing, not for grief or mirth
There was not any tree that stirred
Nor any sound of death or birth
Of joy or pain, heaven or earth
But only emptiness that burred.
For Michael stood before a wall
And though he knew he was not tall
The wall seemed higher than it ought
And as he looked it seemed to pull
Him nearer to its bricks: he thought
It dangerous and thus he fought
With all his will against its call.
But Michael’s curiosity
Grew all the stronger and, so, he
Grasped both his hands upon the brick
And pulled a little, just to see
If it would hold, he made a kick
And swung his other leg o’er, quick
Till on the wall was he.
The world seemed different from this height
And he was gladsome of the sight
To which he had, hereto, been blind.
But looking now - from left to right –
He saw all that he left behind
Were forests of a closed mind
With all its branches made of spite.
For now, before his eyes he saw
A little cottage, with a door
And though its shutters were shut fast
And it seemed who dwelt there must be poor,
Through the silence seemed to blast
A breath of fear, which did not last
But Michael was transfixed with awe.
And yet the fear was not his own
But of a spirit kept alone
Within a silent prison there
And Michael knew he heard it moan,
Was it a cursing? Was it prayer?
Should he listen? Dare he dare?
Was he safe upon his throne?
These thoughts, thought Michael as he stood
Upon the wall, still as he could,
Remembering a lullaby
He used to hear, which said the wood
Beyond the Falls of Farrow, sigh
And lure children there to die,
If they’d been bad instead of good.
But Michael Robertson was brave
And, although he feared the grave,
He thought no one could e’er be good
And know how to always behave.
And so, because he thought he could,
He climbed down from where he stood,
As any foolish man or brave.
And now he was before the door,
He heard the sound he’d heard before,
A cry of pain it seemed to be;
But what might be the dreadful cause?
The prison of a thousand laws?
Oh what could bring such misery?
And in that moment, he did gladden
He knew the magic made to madden
Was this dreadful mystery
In the forest of Benfadden:
Where all human misery
Is heard and felt; But how could he,
Break its enchantment? How could he?
Perhaps the answer must be found
So Michael sat upon the ground
And thought of all that he had learned,
Repeated rhymes around, around
Till all the verse within him burned
As hot as fire – then, how he yearned
To rid him of that dreadful sound!
But then, as he could take no more,
He looked again toward the door.
Something inside, there seemed to be!
Perhaps the sound he’d heard before
Came from a creature? Gradually,
He crept forward, for to see
What secret lurked behind the door.
And so upon its frame he smote
And in the forest rang a note:
The magic charm was breaking as,
The miller’s son, who often wrote,
(As many’a lad of fancy has)
In poems, of a pretty lass
Whom he might rescue, still, he smote.
And smote upon that door, till he
Was sure that there was nobody
To hear his ardent knocking; when
The door was opened, suddenly!
There stood before a fair maiden
Who did not know the tongues of men
Because she had grown, wildly.
In loneliness, this maid was born:
Her mother died the very morn
That she was brought into the house,
Wherefore she seemed so forlorn;
And, all so quiet – as a mouse,
Except her weeping: all because
From birth she had been so withdrawn.
But Michael, understood her plight
For, every day, when he would write,
The other children used to play
And they would tease him out of spite,
And pull his hair and chant, and say
‘That Michael will go mad one day’,
Because he loved to watch the light.
And so he smiled at this maid,
And in his open hand he laid
A poem he was writing when
He came upon that little glade.
They both stood still for minutes; then,
She took it, and, it seemed to him
That in that moment, she had prayed.
Although she had no words to say,
It seemed enough: for all can pray
In language of poetic tongue.
And as the sun went down that day,
It rested on the miller’s son
It made him look, not quite, so young,
Yet fresh as darling buds of May.
And as she took his little hand,
They both began to understand
We are not meant to be alone
And, like the waving of a wand
The spell was broken – and the moan
Was gone forever: a new tone
Of hope went out about the land.
Then Michael spoke, slow as he could,
‘My name is Michael’, and the wood
That held the shutters fast did break
And, like the lifting of a hood,
Or veil, for a bridegroom’s sake
The house, so long asleep, did wake
To beautify it as it could.
And then the birds began their song
Oh they had not sung for so long!
And, hearing them, with such delight,
The maiden laughed, and laughed so long
And lo, her eyes were burning bright
The forest bathed in golden light
And marvelled in the sparrow song.
And as they listened, slowly, she
Began, ever so gradually,
To form her lips together, so
She might yet speak, eventually,
To ask him all she’d like to know
And learn of love, and, thereby grow
And live in a society.
The sound she made then, was not quite
A word – the murmur was too slight
But more would come, as she would move
Her tongue around her mouth aright;
She could not speak; but she could love
And so they both set out to prove
That darkness cannot vanquish light:
For in the forest of Benfadden
Where the trees grow green and gladden
All the folk of Farrow Falls,
Stood a house whose shutters sadden
Any child who durst to call.
For, beyond its garden wall,
Tis said is magic made to madden.
About the Creator
Tristan Stone
Tristan read Theology at Cambridge university before training to be a teacher. He has published plays, poetry and prose (non-fiction and fiction) and is working on the fourth volume of his YA "Time's Fickle Glass" series.
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