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The Leaves in September

Summer Love

By The Invisible WriterPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - December 2023
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The Leaves in September
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If June fell like the leaves in September

And love lost the journey before the storm

Summer would slip into the arms of winter

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Moonlight glowing among the stars, would falter

Love would be as naked as the trees

If June fell like the leaves in September

~

Spring flowers would bloom, only to wither

First kisses would be forgotten with goodbyes

Summer would slip into the arms of winter

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Sunlight glowing among the clouds, would quiver

Love would be as frozen as the streams

If June fell like the leaves in September

~

Lightning bugs would shine, only to disappear

First glances would be forgotten with farewells

Summer would slip into the arms of winter

~

Sunlit colors would turn cold with December

Stories of love would vanish with July and August

If June fell like the leaves in September

Summer would slip into the arms of winter

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The Invisible Writer

"Poetry is what happens when nothing else can"

Charles Bukowski

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  • Tiffany Gordon 4 months ago

    Stunning work IW! BRAVO!

  • Yes it would. I feel this one deeply, Invisi.

  • Donna Fox (HKB)5 months ago

    Wow, this was such a peaceful experience for me. My soul felt soothed by your descriptive language and the way you eased us into the official season of winter beginning!! Great work Will!!

  • Paul Stewart5 months ago

    Breathtaking. Beautiful, stunning and breathtaking. You have such a way with words, Will. Wonderful entry and fine Top Story, congrats!

  • Aaliyah Madison5 months ago

    Congratulations on the Top Story!

  • C. H. Richard5 months ago

    Beautiful ❤️ Love the picture this poem paints. Well done ♥️

  • JAY PATEL5 months ago

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  • Real Poetic5 months ago

    Amazing and emotional nature poetry! Happy New Year! 🥂

  • Test5 months ago

    Great going! Keep up the fantastic effort—congratulations!😊👍

  • Grz Colm5 months ago

    Effortless style..very flowing. Excellent job Will! 😊👍

  • PK Colleran5 months ago

    Lovely 🌹

  • Another fantastic piece. ❤️

  • Lamar Wiggins5 months ago

    Amazing! I love how everything flows together perfectly. It shows the hard work you put into it. Congrats, Will!

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story!

  • Novel Allen5 months ago

    I know now why thou art invisible. It adds such mystery and romance to these wonder words of June. And onwards go the seasons. Congrats.

  • noor5 months ago

    lovely....just loved it

  • K. Kocheryan5 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story! Lovely piece.

  • Mariann Carroll5 months ago

    Congratulations on Top Story ❤️👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽🏆

  • Dana Crandell5 months ago

    Wonderful words! Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Caroline Jane5 months ago

    Congratulations. Definitely well deserved!

  • Kristen Balyeat5 months ago

    Absolutely a top story! 👏🏽💫✨

  • Will, I love the way the theme of the seasons, nature and the natural ebb and flow of relationships are highlighted so beautifully.

  • Mariann Carroll5 months ago

    I read this three times and I love the lines in the poem . My favorite line : Love would be as naked as the trees.

  • Daphsam5 months ago

    Outstanding. Very beautiful and so lyrical.

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