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The Last Word

The Despair Felt When The End Hits -A Villanelle Inspired By An Image

By Mike Singleton ๐Ÿ’œ Mikeydred Published 2 years ago โ€ข 1 min read
Bouke de Vries: Limburgh, Late 17th century Famille Vert porcelain plate and acrylic

Introduction

A villanelle about a relationship that is going to end.

The song is "I Wish It Would Rain" by The Temptations, a line I use in the poem.

This is the third poem that I have written inspired by the images of Bouke de Vries

The Last Word

โšซ๐ŸŒฉ๏ธ๐Ÿดโ€๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿดโ€๐ŸŒฉ๏ธโšซ

My Life Is In Darkness, I Wonder Why

You Stopped Talking To Me, Words Never Came

Waiting For The Last Word, That Is Goodbye

โšซ๐Ÿ–คโšซ

Outside There Are Storm Clouds, I Sit And Cry

The Parting Fills Me With Nothing But Pain

My Life Is In Darkness, I Wonder Why

โšซ๐Ÿ–คโšซ

I Thought There Was Love, Or Was That A Lie

Under These Dark Clouds I Wish It Would Rain

Waiting For The Last Word, That Is Goodbye

โšซ๐Ÿ–คโšซ

My Life Shattered, I Feel I Want To Die

I Know I Will Never See You Again

My Life Is In Darkness, I Wonder Why

โšซ๐Ÿ–คโšซ

I Wish I Could See, I Can't Even Try

My Hope Is Lost, It Will Not Come Again

Waiting For The Last Word, That Is Goodbye

โšซ๐Ÿ–คโšซ

I Will Go Into The Last Endless Night

I'm Taking With Me The Last Hope And Blame

My Life Is In Darkness, I Wonder Why

Waiting For The Last Word, That Is Goodbye

โšซ๐ŸŒฉ๏ธ๐Ÿดโ€๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿดโ€๐ŸŒฉ๏ธโšซ

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    Written by Mike Singleton ๐Ÿ’œ Mikeydred