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The Hurting

"...I just got to KETCHUP with my life"

By Brenton FPublished 6 months ago 1 min read

i’ve been stabbed

i’ve been bludgeoned

i’ve been beaten within

an inch of my life

and none of that hurt

like this does now

and none of that

compares

to everything i did to you

and none of that

comes close

to the hell

i put you through

i’ve been electrocuted

held down and rooted

i struggled and screamed

i was burnt on the outside

i was torn on the inside

that hurt a lot, but nothing like this

and none of that

compares

to the hurting

i’ve put on you

and none of that

comes close

cause you said

that we were through

i’ve been hit by a car

i’ve been set on fire

i’ve sported many a broken bone

but nothing hurts

like watching you leave

leaving me all alone

and none of that

compares

to the hurting

i’ve put you through

and none of that

can hold a candle

if there is

no me and you

sad poetry

About the Creator

Brenton F

It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa

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Comments (7)

  • Jollyoddbod Poetry6 months ago

    This one had me encapsulated and I could almost feel every ounce of heartache and guilt. Thank you for sharing this Brenton, it was too powerful to stay in a notebook.

  • Grz Colm6 months ago

    Your damn subheading threw me off! I received no laugh out loud moments in this introspective and achy love poem. Excellent work B. But what is that quote from?

  • The repetition in this is very well-executed. Phenomenal job!

  • Hannah Moore6 months ago

    Emotional pain is so so so painful.

  • Gosh this was so heartbreaking. The regret was so intense. Loved your poem!

  • Poppy 6 months ago

    Incredibly well written!

  • Andrew C McDonald6 months ago

    That’s a world of pain my friend. Great job.

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