The Great Kirby Conundrum
For the Vocal Challenge “Ode to an Ordinary Object”
oh sweet pins
where do you go?
how can you persistently
evade me so?
you seem to be an endless expense
teasing me always with pretence
that you are mine
.
I love awaking on days
when you are there
for how easily you style
my golden brown hair.
on others it seems I’m just not enough
and life with me must be so tough
that you leave
.
oh sweet pins
you must surely know,
i’ve had thousands of you
yet it doesn’t ease the blow
when you prefer to lay on the ground
hoping to never again be found
and return home
.
how easily
you abandon me
and over the decades
cost a hefty fee.
can’t you just choose to stay
for more than a mere single day?
and become friends
.
oh sweet pins
I’m trying my best
must I put you under
house arrest?
to stop you absconding, removing risk
and never letting you leave my desk
make you a prisoner?
.
do you leave alone
or in groups?
do you come alive
like a platoon of troops
determined to escape your master
or some impending disaster?
of which I’m unaware
.
oh sweet pins
am I mistaken?
is the truth really that
you are being taken?
kidnapped by some sneaky mouse
that lives under the floor of our beautiful house
awaiting rescue?
.
or perhaps a bird
flies in during the day
when we are at work
or distracted by play?
are you trapped in a nest somewhere
wishing to be back in my hair?
and safely home
.
oh sweet pins
where could you be?
thousands of you
successfully flee.
I take you out my hair each night
and then by morning you’ve taken flight
never again to be seen
.
so many questions
I just wish I knew
what theory of mine
is most true?
perhaps the one about a miniature bear
who really loves to pin back his hair?
stealing you from me
.
oh sweet pins
I really try my best
to keep you safe
and pass this test.
do I really warrant such distress
putting on a new dress?
and searching thee
.
hunting under sofas
as I must
my polished nails
now filled with dust.
to find but a lowly one or two
and secure my beautiful new updo
before it falls
.
oh annoying pins
I want to be done
with this hunting game
that’s just never been fun.
last week I bought a two hundred box
was it all stolen by a magical fox
who likes his fur styled?
.
long or short
coated tips or plain
colours and diamanté
all bought in vain
tell me how many do I have to buy
before you will finally comply
and stay?
.
oh sweet pins
I still love you so,
for you offer hair magic
that helps me to glow.
whether holding back bangs or securing a bun
you making hair pinning so easy and fun
when you’re here
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Comments (3)
“do you leave alone or in groups?” LOL definitely in groups.
Lol, this was hilarious! House arrest and miniature bear! I loved this!
omgosh Kayleigh 🤣 this is so good! And I'm a male with no hair so.... not even relevant to me, and I still think this is fantastic. 👏 Definite contender for the challenge. Outstanding work 💙