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“The Goodbye That Pretended to Stay

LOVE STORY

By Huda YusufPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
“What We Were

We were a quiet story,

written in fading ink,

whispers between the lines

that no one else could read.

A glance across the crowded dark,

a brush of hands,

a spark—

and then the silence grew louder

than anything we ever said.

You loved me like a secret,

carefully kept,

never quite spoken.

I loved you like a promise

made under breath—

something meant,

but never kept.

Time didn’t take you

all at once.

It peeled you back

like autumn leaves

from the arms of summer trees—

slow and cruel,

until I could no longer reach

the version of you

that once reached for me.

I still see your ghost

in the places we swore were ours—

in coffee cups gone cold,

in songs we never finished,

in the space beside me

where your warmth used to sleep.

And still,

I wouldn’t trade a second,

even if all it left me

was this ache,

this hollow room

echoing

with the sound of your name

that no longer belongs to me.

Some loves don’t end.

They just change shape—

from holding hands

to holding back tears,

from late night laughter

to mid-day silence.

We were beautiful.

We were real.

We were

a goodbye

pretending to be

a forever.

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About the Creator

Huda Yusuf

"Diving deep into the world of imagination — original fiction that stirs emotion, sparks curiosity, and keeps you turning the page. Welcome to my universe of stories."

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    Written by Huda Yusuf