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The Gates Were Quiet In Heaven

Beyond them was like a picture book story

By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk Published about a year ago • 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Gates Were Quiet In Heaven

The gates were quiet

not carved with pride,

just standing open

clean and wide.

No echo rang

no sky was stirred,

yet somehow

every star was heard.

No guards in white

no trumpet sound,

just steady ground

and peace unbound.

A hush like truth

not meant to speak,

just met my eyes

and touched my cheek.

The path was worn

from many feet,

and every soul

still felt complete.,

No need to kneel

no need to cry,

just walked right in

wave you old life Goodbye.

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♿ V+ Marie381Uk

Poetry has lived in me since childhood.

Ink spills the feelings words fear to say.

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    Written by ♿ V+ Marie381Uk