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The Final Eclipse

For The Vocal Acrostic Challenge

By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished about a month ago 1 min read
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This is a sideswipe at evangelical religious morons who cherry-pick holy books to justify misogyny, racism, hate of minority groups, and any non-binary sexual groups.

I have chosen a few examples from the Bible that show God for the uncaring entity that it is.

The music is "God Was Never on Your Side" by Motörhead

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Expect No Salvation, This Is The End

Coming On Dark Winds, God's Vengeance He Sends

Lo This Dies Irae Shows No Mercy

In The Flood, He Drowned Races So Many

Passover, God's Dark Angel Children Killed

So Many Died, It Was God's Savage Will

Expect No Salvation, This Is The End

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  • Joe O’Connorabout a month ago

    Very interesting take on the Eclipse concept Mike, and I like how it begins and ends with the same line. Thought-provoking stuff!

  • Christy Munsonabout a month ago

    You had me at Motorhead

  • The Dani Writerabout a month ago

    Hoooooooo!!! This is FIRE!!! 🤩

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Now this I loveeeeeeeeee so much!! Hehehehehehhehhehehe

  • Babs Iversonabout a month ago

    Impressive & creative!!! Sending virtual hugs!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Anna about a month ago

    This was cruel! I liked it!

  • Mariann Carrollabout a month ago

    This was very dark, I just one comment selling a product. Are you ok with that?

  • John Charles Harmanabout a month ago

    I am a practicing lay Nichiren Shoshu Buddhist for 50 years. It is a bit naive of anyone to believe people vote only according to religious beliefs https://open.spotify.com/episode/3ZV6tsMUP2gpGz4ApMgsuP?si=UJuXc3pqSKW5O_Jg6t8Tkw

  • Kodahabout a month ago

    Incredible poem! Love the creativity! ❤🔥

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