The Feel Of Red Dirt...
<Quadru-Haiku #4>
By Tiffany Gordon Published about a year ago • 1 min read
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The feel of red dirt...
residing between my toes...
makes my spirit soar...
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Tiffany Gordon
I am a super-spiritual, fun-loving artist, writer, & peer-counselor residing in the Pacific Northwest. I am also an Institute of Children's Literature alumna who enjoys writing about the triumph of the human spirit.
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I'm from an area of Australia that has extremely fertile red earth so I know this exact feeling. My mother has photos of her and her sister with red feet from running barefoot in the area. It really does make the spirit soar.
Fertile red, dirt of earth. Hey that could be a haiku.
Barefoot’s best x
Excellent! Who needs shoes anyway?
This is great! Very well written!
Hearted , Love it 🥰
Gorgeous imagery...I think I wiggled my toes reading it. Loved this :)
Great poem!!!!. (I vaguely recall chasing some concept of the clay from which God made humans in Genesis being red dirt, but I think of Australia being the land of red dirt and Africa being the origin of humankind.)
Your Haiku makes me wanna soar to Mars! I loved it!
Another great Haiku!
Reminds me of Kauai, Hawaii or Prince Edward Island, Canada both have red dirt and it is spectacular. Love the image and your beautiful words 🌺
Superb!!! Splendid!!! Love it!!!
Allegiance ❤️💯👍😉
This is beautiful! Is it the iron? Does iron give you super powers?😍😍 So beautiful! The picture is gorgeous, too!
Beautifully done.
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