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The Feel Of Red Dirt...

<Quadru-Haiku #4>

By Tiffany Gordon Published about a year ago β€’ 1 min read
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The Feel Of Red Dirt...
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The feel of red dirt...

residing between my toes...

makes my spirit soar...

nature poetry
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About the Creator

Tiffany Gordon

I am a super-spiritual, fun-loving artist, writer, & peer-counselor residing in the Pacific Northwest. I am also an Institute of Children's Literature alumna who enjoys writing about the triumph of the human spirit.

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  • Ash Taylorabout a year ago

    I'm from an area of Australia that has extremely fertile red earth so I know this exact feeling. My mother has photos of her and her sister with red feet from running barefoot in the area. It really does make the spirit soar.

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    Fertile red, dirt of earth. Hey that could be a haiku.

  • Jo Croabout a year ago

    Barefoot’s best x

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Excellent! Who needs shoes anyway?

  • Alex H Mittelman about a year ago

    This is great! Very well written!

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Hearted , Love it πŸ₯°

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Gorgeous imagery...I think I wiggled my toes reading it. Loved this :)

  • Julia Schulzabout a year ago

    Great poem!!!!. (I vaguely recall chasing some concept of the clay from which God made humans in Genesis being red dirt, but I think of Australia being the land of red dirt and Africa being the origin of humankind.)

  • Your Haiku makes me wanna soar to Mars! I loved it!

  • Another great Haiku!

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Reminds me of Kauai, Hawaii or Prince Edward Island, Canada both have red dirt and it is spectacular. Love the image and your beautiful words 🌺

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Superb!!! Splendid!!! Love it!!!

  • Allegiance β€οΈπŸ’―πŸ‘πŸ˜‰

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    This is beautiful! Is it the iron? Does iron give you super powers?😍😍 So beautiful! The picture is gorgeous, too!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Beautifully done.

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