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The Fall Queen

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By Mother CombsPublished 7 months ago 1 min read
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The Fall Queen
Photo by Ricardo Gomez Angel on Unsplash

Leaves of tangerine

Who is the Fall Queen

Leaves of crimson

With her hair undone

Leaves of yellow

I’d like to say hello

Leaves of brown

She wears a grand crown

Leaves of green

Playing her tambourine

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About the Creator

Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Novel Allen7 months ago

    Fall bows to the queen. Short and read with a crown to colors. So lovely.

  • Mackenzie Davis7 months ago

    Oh, that last couplet...I adore that image!!

  • Cathy holmes7 months ago

    Beautiful piece. Well done.

  • Whoaaaa, this was so beautiful. Such pretty fall colours!

  • Poppy 7 months ago

    This is gorgeous! I love the repetition and the way you wove colours into it and I adored the ending!

  • Such a happy feeling this poem brings

  • Babs Iverson7 months ago

    Lovely and love this!!!❤️❤️

  • Joelle E🌙7 months ago

    Samhain vibes!!

  • Brenton F7 months ago

    Your words bring a bright vividity to the colours of Autumn.

  • This is cute 🍂🧡💛💚

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