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The Dark Arctic Is Coming

A haiku

By Oneg In The ArcticPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
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Photo taken by Author in Ulukhaktok, NT.

Layered azul hues

The wind howls louder than wolf

No sun to bask in

nature poetrysurreal poetry
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Oneg In The Arctic

A storyteller and poet of arctic adventures, good food, identity, mental health, and more.

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  • Ward Norcutt2 months ago

    I agree - the last line strikes a dissonant chord for me, too. What is the the central image and message you want to convey? you have 3 distinctly different things happening here: the visual layers, the howling wind, and not being able to bask in the sun....I think the most interesting part is the wolf.....maybe start there for a revision...best regards,

  • Heather Hubler2 months ago

    I love that you've been sharing your own images! You painted a very vivid picture, great work :)

  • Gina C.2 months ago

    I love this and how you used the word "Azul"; I've always loved that word in Spanish :) Great work!

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Fantastic!!!

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    This is great.

  • C. H. Richard2 months ago

    Beautiful Chill from 3 lines

  • Great words and a wonderful image

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