The Dark Arctic Is Coming
A haiku
By Oneg In The ArcticPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
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Photo taken by Author in Ulukhaktok, NT.
Layered azul hues
The wind howls louder than wolf
No sun to bask in
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Oneg In The Arctic
A storyteller and poet of arctic adventures, good food, identity, mental health, and more.
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Comments (7)
I agree - the last line strikes a dissonant chord for me, too. What is the the central image and message you want to convey? you have 3 distinctly different things happening here: the visual layers, the howling wind, and not being able to bask in the sun....I think the most interesting part is the wolf.....maybe start there for a revision...best regards,
I love that you've been sharing your own images! You painted a very vivid picture, great work :)
I love this and how you used the word "Azul"; I've always loved that word in Spanish :) Great work!
Fantastic!!!
This is great.
Beautiful Chill from 3 lines
Great words and a wonderful image