The Dance of Life
Dancing into Eternity
He perfectly choreographed the dance of life, created before time,
presented at birth as we step in rhythm with the points, from each to each.
at times wondering, asking, how did we get to this point, not realizing our presence, like the choreographics of the dance, was dictated before time.
so as we tango from point to point, waltz to points awaiting, the dance of life takes us to each,
leading us to the final point, the one which before time was numbered,
our number!!
we grasp for the hands of time, we loose touch with the rhythm
our steps no longer perform!
we have reached the predetermined destination of our dance, the final point, the last dance!!
we now waltz with the designer of life's dance, the deliverer of our dreams,
the master planner of our dance, the points, the flesh to the fleshless,
the hands of time evolve into eternity, we to the eternal dance,
choreographed, before time!!
About the Creator
Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
Write on my friends
Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Keep reading
More stories from Moe Radosevich and writers in Poets and other communities.
What are some unbelievable things that used to be against the law?
First stop: Ancient Rome! If you weren't royalty, you could forget about rocking that purple toga. The fancy dye was reserved for the rich and powerful. And ladies, no crying at funerals! Apparently, the Romans weren't fans of hired mourners. 🏛️😢 Over in Imperial China, littering could cost you a hand during the Shang Dynasty! And if you were a fan of carp during the Tang Dynasty, tough luck. Catching and selling the fish was a big no-no because it shared a name with the emperor's fam. 🤚👑 Medieval England had some doozies! Hunting deer in the royal forest? Say goodbye to your eyes and your manhood until 1217! And forget about those lavish feasts – meals were capped at two courses by law for over 500 years! 🍽️😱 Fashion police were no joke in Medieval England. Men had to cover their junk, and their pointy shoes couldn't be too pointy. The church even dictated when married couples could have sex! 🛌❌ In Tudor and Stuart England, silk was a big no-no for anyone below the rank of a knight's son. But you better have been rocking a wool cap on Sundays and holidays, or else you'd be slapped with a fine! 🙅♂️💰 During the Puritan era, Christmas was canceled! From 1647 to 1660, anyone caught celebrating could kiss their money and property goodbye. 🎄❌😒 In the good ol' USA, some states had beef with booze. No cold beer in stores, and no alcohol sales on election days! Blue laws also banned shopping, golfing, and circus trips on Sundays until the '80s. 🍺🚫 Pinball machines were public enemy #1 in several U.S. cities from the '30s to the '70s. In 1942, NYC cops went on a pinball smashing spree, destroying thousands of machines! 🔨💥 Even dancing wasn't safe! New York had a "cabaret law" banning dancing in businesses without a special license for almost a century. And in Elmore City, Oklahoma, public dancing was illegal from 1898 to 1980! 💃🕺
By Infographics Show4 days ago in Poets
Comments (1)
The hands of time evolve into eternity, we to the eternal dance. I loved this line so much! Such a beautiful poem!