THE BREAK UP!!!😱
My ex caused too much drama!👎🏾
I NEVER thought that this day would come... 😢
Ice Cream, it's time for you to kick rocks; there's a new guy that has been taking me for a spin around the block...
My new guy is super-sweet and filled to the brim with gooey-goodness...
In fact, his selfless love never misses... truth be told, neither do his passionate kisses...
My ex-man Ice Cream had me fooled... I thought he was a good guy but he always gave me a tummy ache on the way to the pool...
Mr. Ice Cream eventually became a huge hazard... He always cheated on me by taking my biles for a run...
His indiscretions caused me to gas up the scene in frustration... and always prevented me from having my fun...
Man... it's a good thing God is good & that Monsieur Cupcake finally came along... because I desperately needed someone to erase all of Mr. Ice Cream's numerous wrongs... 😁
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Tiffany Gordon
I am a super-spiritual, fun-loving artist, writer, & peer-counselor residing in the Pacific Northwest. I am also an Institute of Children's Literature alumna who enjoys writing about the triumph of the human spirit.
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Quite cute!
I'll be honest.. Ice cream over cupcakes any day.. but of course it seems like it doesn't agree with you, so i wish you Monsieur Cupcake all the best, and a happy and long future.
Very cute and gave me a chuckle! Great birthday story too! Can only take so much ice cream we definitely need a cupcake every once in awhile too 🧁
May you always have more cupcakes in your life than you can eat... especially on your Birthday! (Happy birthday!)
Love is everywhere! LOL! I really enjoyed reading your piece.
Lol as someone who has recently become intolerant to dairy- I felt this 🤣🤣 very cute piece!
Lol this was brilliant and funny!
Sweet!!!! Loved it!!!♥️♥️💕
how sweet. id love either
Lol!! Loved this. well done.
This was fun, I'm a sucker for all things sweet
I still prefer ice cream, though now that I'm diabetic I have to restrict both. I liked your presentation, just the same.
😅 Looks like someone satisfied that sweet tooth! Glad it was you! Loved this!
Not me imagining the ice cream man cheating on you and then you found love with a cupcake baker 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Don't ask what's wrong with me because I don't know hahahahhahaha
It sounds like you and Monsieur will be very happy together!!! Fun and creative!!! Thank you Tiffany for a much needed chuckle!!!
Very funny.
This story hit my funny bone 🤭🤣This was a very fun read🥰💃🏽
Hahaha this is hilarious Tiffany. Goodbye Mr Ice Cream!
This is brilliant! Monsieur Cupcake for the win! Mr. Ice Cream and are going to have a talk. Great work!
This Piece is magnificent, sis Love💕Love💖Love🎉💕📝
Haha. This is yummy great.
🤣🤣🤣 this is so funny!!! I loved it!