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The Border Between Then and Now

A Haiku

By Steven FitzgeraldPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
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Caught in your shadow

My buried youth awakens

Sadness melds with mist

nature poetry
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About the Creator

Steven Fitzgerald

Hi!

Film, theatre, mental health, sport, politics, music, travel, and the occasional short story... it's a varied mix!

Tips greatly appreciated!!

Thank you!!

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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    Well-structured & engaging content

  3. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Meagan Dion2 months ago

    I actually said aloud "ooh, that one was good." Very nice!

  • U.Rdiya2 months ago

    Beautiful. I actually felt your words!!!

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    This is beautiful, both visually and emotionally. Well done.

  • Gina C.2 months ago

    This is very beautiful and emotion-evoking - great job!

  • Heather Hubler2 months ago

    Loved the language in this! And the image paired so well with the whole tone of the piece. Well done :)

  • Excellent words for the challenge, great image

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