The Bleats of Cheats
Absurdity rules
Rules for thee and not for me,
the bane of our world of cheats.
Full of excuses,
the judge confuses
their misdeeds and the law concedes.
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This limerick is a rant about the breakdown of law and order in our society, cities, classroom, homes, etc. Something has to change or we are headed for chaos. It’s open to interpretation as it can apply to many things.
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J. S. Wade
Since reading Tolkien in Middle school, I have been fascinated with creating, reading, and hearing art through story’s and music. I am a perpetual student of writing and life.
J. S. Wade owns all work contained here.
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Perfect-I might add the tag "social commentary" It's an excellent candidate for that
Very well done.
It's sad but true.
Congrats for your top story! love this limerick.
congrats on top story! This is a great limerick. I like the social commentary!
Congratulations on Top Story!
Congrats on top story! This one make's you think.
I love that you have used the open form of a limerick to make a valid and pertinent social commentary. Good use of form!
Apologies for coming late to the party on this one Scott! This is so good. You really have a knack for limericks! and this has a nice dark undertone! Congrats on the well-deserved Top Story!
Brilliant!
This is great!!
Simply perfect - no more - no less!
Well done Scott. Glad you got a top story for this
just loved the way how story has been narrated!
I love it. Double standards are everywhere as well as people who will do whatever it takes to get ahead no matter whose back they have to step on to get there. There’s so much said here and so many ways to interpret. It’s quite sad really because that means we have a lot of broken systems. No matter where you go in the world these days there is injustice and abuse of power. I think it’s always been that way and we’re just now realizing it because of social media and people speaking out. It seems like everything needs reform at this point lol and now my comment is longer than the limerick I’m commenting on and also needs reform😅 well done!
Excellent commentary, love this limerick! Congrats on top story 🥰
Congrats on the top story and thanks for pointing out the issue!
Congratulations on your Top Story! Excellent commentary in limerick form 🤗
Congrats on Top Story! A thought-provoking limerick!
I love that this is a top story!
Congratulations on Top Story! ☘️
Congratulations 🎉
Indeed. Well writ! Congratulations!
Congratulations!!! Very well Said
Lowkey Scott, I thought this was a Vocal slampiece.