The Biggest Screen
A free verse by, P.A.Vinura Jayasanka
It is where I see all the war end,
and the peace born,
it is where I see the lovely spring.
comes up sweeping away, all the misery,
also, it is where I see all my dreams,
come to reality,
and it is the place,
I visualize all the thoughts in a flash,
the way shining stars sprayed around,
the way flights move slowly,
making little glowing spots,
always create a dynamic vibe,
to the biggest-ever screen,
you can watch,
I know grey clouds pass,
making some barriers,
it is very fine,
I can wait, till they go,
and my eyes are on.
the biggest ever screen,
yes, it is the Night Sky,
it is where I always see,
your prettiest smile and,
mind-relieving expressions,
though you are watching silently,
with usual amusement,
your sparkling eyes,
mutter thousands of untold words,
with the nicest voice of yours,
when the day is so tight,
it makes my day in a flash,
was it the kindness lying,
in those adorable eyes?
that's yet to be found,
hopefully the river of time,
will solve it,
again weird clouds disturb,
I don't bother about that..
so the sky seems never getting older,
only our memories are,
our eyes get shut down one day,
not the sky-screen will wind out,
it will stay there,
making the space for people,
to visualize more in the future,
so the gorgeous primrose,
let's keep hopes alive,
to see , more soothing scenes on the screen!
About the Creator
P.A.Vinura Jayasanka
Hi! I'm an Engineering student who is passionate on poetry and movie critiques with mastering both creative and analytical aspects. You can follow me on facebook:
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Comments (11)
The sky is so freeing; may it continue to bring us peace and share it's beauty. Wonderful prose. Newly subscribed; Congratulations on your Top Story!
Gorgeous - congrats on top story!
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Excellent work! Keep up the fantastic effortโcongrats!
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR TOP STORY! PEACE!
This was absolutely wonderful! Loved your poem! Congratulations on your Top Story! ๐๐๐๐๐๐
Beautiful piece. Congrats on the TS.
congratulations on TS. this is so beautiful; I really love this.
Congrats on Top Story!๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ
congratulations
Great Vinura! Obviously, the night sky is a super place to be relieve.