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The Beat of the Heart

From the beginning to the end - Poem.

By Paul StewartPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
The Beat of the Heart
Photo by Adele Morris on Unsplash

It starts with the beat of the heart, the energy,

As the sound, the vibrational rhythm pounds

Followed by the gasp and gentle, consistency

As the sound and force of each breath of life

In due time, sound emits from their mouth

The cries, the laughs, the comforting sighs

Transform into mumbles, then words and speech

As the crawl begins, one hand in front of the other

shuffling along, exploring and learning

When their growing limbs get stronger, they stretch

Pull themselves up and start to survey all around them

From two feet, the pitter patter, the tip tap

From mother's milk to soft then solid foods

Before too long, they're off to explore the wider world

The cacophony of sights, sounds, scents, textures and tastes

Experiences, learning, love, laughter, sadness, and pain

Possibilities for the life that lays before them, what they do, what they don't

All backed by the same beat of the heart, the energy

That carries us all through our mortal existence

Until the very end, when the beat of the heart stops.

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Author's Notes: It's a poem that basically grew from the idea expressed in the first two lines. Make of it what you will! It's out there in the interether now! (Totally a word)

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Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

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Comments (10)

  • Grz Colm8 months ago

    Good work! You were even making up new words back then “interether”! How Paulphetic of you! Sorry I will see myself out! 😬..also that was a play on prophetic and definitely not pathetic!!

  • ThatWriterWoman9 months ago

    I really like this. The concept of those heartbeats and breaths that go unnoticed, but constantly fuel us through life. Brilliant!

  • Cathy holmes10 months ago

    This is wonderful. Love it!

  • Kristen Balyeat10 months ago

    Love the rhythm of this,Paul, and the sweet expression of how quickly it all goes made me emotional! I'm trying to hold on to the time that continually slips through my fingers. Great work with this one, and love the photo you picked!

  • EYHCS10 months ago

    Deep And so true The energy of the heart is where we live, grow, and everything in between until the last heartbeat!

  • The circle of life. This was so beautifully written! 🍩🥐

  • Sara Wilson10 months ago

    Awe. I love this <3

  • Darkos10 months ago

    Beautifuly written!

  • Jazzy 10 months ago

    This was good! The whole process of being alive 😩 oh to be young again with what I know now

  • Alex H Mittelman 10 months ago

    Great poem!

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