The Awareness of Nothing
Walking Still but Not Moving
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Time is standing still
I'm not looking for nothing
Movement goes nowhere
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Rick Henry Christopher
Writing is a distraction for me. It takes me to places unknown that fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and a soothing of the breaks and bruises of the day.
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Last Days
The mirror showed a reflection that wasn't my own. It was me, but there was something warped, and that was not me. I narrow my eyes and peer into the narrowing eyes of my deformed reflection. I was off, and while I could see it in my reflection, no one else could see it. At least no one acknowledges it. Getting out of bed has become a chore. A chore I hate. After fifteen to twenty minutes of lying awake, staring at the ceiling and wishing I hadn't woken up, I finally shift to the side of the bed, legs dangling down the four foot high drop to the floor.
By Colt Henderson6 days ago in Horror
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Very cool poem and I like that middle line! 😁
Like my mind...sometimes there really is nothing
I like It! Well written!
Ohhh I really appreciate this very thoughtful piece
very nice
So watcha looking for? Not nothing is a double negative, so...peers out into distance...let me in on the secret. I won't tell, lol!! Great job!
Ooooo, very deep and mysterious! I love it!
Awesome!!!💖💖💕
So, you're looking for something. I could help if I knew what it was, that is if I could move. Yeah, I'm going off the rails here. Well done.
Deep one my friend. I dig it!
Nice job 👍