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The Awareness of Nothing

Walking Still but Not Moving

By Rick Henry Christopher Published about a year ago 1 min read
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Time is standing still

I'm not looking for nothing

Movement goes nowhere

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Rick Henry Christopher

Writing is a distraction to fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and soothing the bruises of the day.

The shattered pieces of life will not discourage me.

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  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    Very cool poem and I like that middle line! 😁

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Like my mind...sometimes there really is nothing

  • Alex H Mittelman about a year ago

    I like It! Well written!

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Ohhh I really appreciate this very thoughtful piece

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    So watcha looking for? Not nothing is a double negative, so...peers out into distance...let me in on the secret. I won't tell, lol!! Great job!

  • Ooooo, very deep and mysterious! I love it!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Awesome!!!💖💖💕

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    So, you're looking for something. I could help if I knew what it was, that is if I could move. Yeah, I'm going off the rails here. Well done.

  • Jason Ray Morton about a year ago

    Deep one my friend. I dig it!

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Nice job 👍

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