Coffee in my hair
Starlight in my pocket
I feel you everywhere
I keep you in a locket
Dawn, you’re the anchor of my days
Your quiet glow sets my soul ablaze
Sometimes life can feel so disjointed
The lack of air leaves me disappointed
But like a friend, you’re always there
The law of Nature is always fair
Bleary eyes
Little death
Dreamy sky
Deep breath
I breathe you in, and you make me new
The antidote is always you
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Comments (5)
Really well done! I also love the vibe of your page with the images you've chosen. It feels tranquil and deep.
Wowser, such a lovely piece, Joelle! Well done!
Oh this was such a wonderful poem!
Love this one! Gorgeous piece, Joelle! Dawn is my favorite time of day💫
So refreshing and lovely 👏🏼