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The ABCs they didn't teach you.

A Beer, Cold.

By Joe O’ConnorPublished 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
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The ABCs they didn't teach you.
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A is for Alcoholism, the cause of all distress,

B is for Bank account – empty,

C is for Childhood trauma, that never quite goes away,

D is for ‘Don’t touch my bevvy’.

E is for Ego that can’t see a problem,

F is for Fridge full of beer,

G is for Gaslighting, because it’s all your fault,

H is for Helping pay bills in arrears.

I is for Inventing a different life at school,

J is for Jealousy of friends,

K is for Keep your wits about you,

L is for Loneliness that never ends.

M is for ‘Mum, can we leave, please?’

N is for Nights without sleep,

O is for Offences and assaulting police,

P is for Passed out on the lounge suite.

Q is for Quietly crying,

R is for Rehabs only help for a time,

S is for Shame, cheeks burning with shame,

T is for Tipping out half bottles of wine.

U is for Unrequited love,

V is for Visible bruising, hidden because you’re smart,

W is for Waiting on adulthood,

X is for X-rays, even, could see this broken heart.

Y is for Years of therapy, trying to gain some expertise,

Z is for Zero alcohol in my drink, that’d be great, please.

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About the Creator

Joe O’Connor

New Zealander living in London

Teacher of English and History, and sport-lover

Mostly short stories and poems📚

Feel free to be honest- one constructive comment beats a hundred generic ones

Currently writing James The Wonderer

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  • Windchime3 months ago

    Great work Joe! Well done! And so true!

  • Mason Darnielle3 months ago

    So very real and raw love it!

  • Brilliantly written and oh so true! Seeing it secondhand was enough for me to choose option Z… Obviously alcohol is fine in moderation, but sadly many can’t cope with it & others suffer the fallout. A valuable story!

  • Anna 4 months ago

    Creative!

  • Ali SP4 months ago

    I love the concept in this piece. There is so much in life that we are not adequately prepared for. Nicely done and a great entry to the challenge.

  • L.C. Schäfer4 months ago

    I'm very much hoping not autobiographical, but it's raw enough for me to believe it is.

  • Babs Iverson4 months ago

    Magnificently written!!! Bravo!!!♥️♥️💕

  • Grz Colm4 months ago

    Excellent work. Unfortunately relatable for many I’m sure.

  • Hannah Moore4 months ago

    Brilliant. Not a lot of words to show such a lot of complexity

  • This held so much truth and depth to it. It hit me so hard because it was extremely relatable! I hope this places in the challenge!

  • Salomé Saffiri4 months ago

    oh, I truly enjoyed it. what a good concept you have come up with, and the message is well-put!

  • Mackenzie Davis4 months ago

    I concur with Joe P. This is hugely important. I know a couple alcoholics and your poem rings true. Especially the E and G. Fantastic work, Joe! (Lol, 2 Joes!)

  • Emmy B4 months ago

    This is really excellent. Thanks for writing this and sharing this. Deserving of top story!

  • Joe Patterson4 months ago

    Perhaps the most important entry to the challenge.

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