Tetrachromancy
Oh, to have had the power to see the colours
I saw snowflakes dance in the sky on the day we met. I saw the bright crescent moon on the night of our first date. I saw a pure soul when you kissed me and I was enchanted by your smile, as sparkling white as my wedding gown.
I didn’t see the emptiness to come.
I saw the greens of fresh grass and newly budding trees on our first spring walk. I saw the emeralds in the earrings you gave me on our anniversary, and the green football jersey I gave you.
I never saw the colour of your envy.
I saw the reds of roses on my birthday and Valentines. I saw the cinnabar candy hearts you loved and the twinkling red lights on the Christmas tree.
I couldn’t envision the fire of your anger.
I saw the brilliant yellows of the setting sun, and the spring daffodils. I saw the canaries and the warblers and heard their beautiful songs.
I never saw your cowardice, but I heard your shouts.
I saw the black of the stormy night sky as the thunder crashed and I cuddled in your arms. I saw the bears on our trips up north and the squirrels in the trees outside our window. I tasted the blackberries – your favourite.
I was blinded to the cold charcoal of your heart.
Should I have seen?
Could I have known?
Oh, to have had the power to see the true colours,
behind your blue eyes.
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (53)
wow 53 comments now... pretty cool idea with the color comparisons!
Excellent as always though this one left me feeling angry for the narrator. Your words can stir strong emotions. Quite the superpower :)
I xoulf have sworn I left a comment on this previously. I may be cracking up! Excellent as ever and really poignant to boot. 🥰
The use of colours to show the two sides is beautifully done. I loved this so much!
This is so moving. Beautiful imagery and such strong emotions. You are outstanding!
wow,wonderful
Fabulous!
Wow, fantastic! I love it!
I really enjoyed the use of colours to build scenes. Well done
Beautiful! The flow is so perfect and the imagery is great!
I was drawn in by the image you chose and stayed for your words, they resonated!
Love never see the wrong side everything is always right in good relationship
Beautifully written, Cathy. 🥰
Wonderful piece, enjoyed it a lot
Oh, I love these visuals and that knife-twist at the end 💙
Good work. Nicely written with contradictions. Great job!
WOW!!! This is truly outstanding writing.
I feel this. Beautifully written and sad like truth is sometimes. ♥️
I like reading pieces, be it poetry or pros that ends with a soft but lingering presence of something significant. You did that here, thanks for sharing Cathy.
This poem so is well-crafted, with a clear message and beautiful use of imagery. Subscribing for sure
I love this work! It definitely deserves to be in the top <3
Excellent ❤️❤️
Excellent write bro amazing 🔥💝💝😊🌠💝🌠✨
Congratulations on Top Story 😊💕
Congratulations on this great top story!