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Swimming in Blue


By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 5 months ago β€’ Updated 5 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Swimming in Blue
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The Rhythm

Of the intellect.

The thought of

Discharging knowledge...

Veering around

Into vulnerable


I opened my core and

Ripples of satisfaction

Entice my nature...

I closed

My presence

And Swim with

the illusion...

Creating vivid pictures

Of ambition.

A multitude of

Emotional turbulence

Envelop my nostrils...

I breathe the success!

Harder to relax as I'm

Closer to the hidden

Glories of the


My Eyes Surfaced

In reality!

I lay there on the fluffy ambiance,

Awaiting for my mind

To return to me...

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

Your Mind is

A Wonderland of

Your Imagination

Make it Beautiful!

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  • Judey Kalchik 24 days ago

    Mariann shared with me a link to your YouTube where you read this. Have you thought of embedding a video into your post?

  • Mariann Carroll5 months ago

    Love it 😍

  • Lilly Cooper5 months ago

    I always finish reading a poem and have to sit with it for a little while for contemplation. A good read.

  • Talia Devora5 months ago

    Powerful. This relates to me!!!

  • C. H. Richard5 months ago

    Beautiful ❀️

  • Melissa Ingoldsby5 months ago

    I feel a nebulous shield of something intangible here in your words! Brilliant!! Love it

  • Whoaaa that was so powerful!

  • Babs Iverson5 months ago

    Impressive πŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ˜Š

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  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    That is so cool. Well done.

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