Swimming in Blue
Of the intellect.
The thought of
I opened my core and
Ripples of satisfaction
Entice my nature...
And Swim with
Creating vivid pictures
A multitude of
Envelop my nostrils...
I breathe the success!
Harder to relax as I'm
Closer to the hidden
Glories of the
My Eyes Surfaced
I lay there on the fluffy ambiance,
Awaiting for my mind
To return to me...
About the Creator
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
Your Mind is
A Wonderland of
Make it Beautiful!
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Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Mariann shared with me a link to your YouTube where you read this. Have you thought of embedding a video into your post?
Love it 😍
I always finish reading a poem and have to sit with it for a little while for contemplation. A good read.
Oh yeah, hit it out of the park yes, excellent 👍👍
Powerful. This relates to me!!!
I feel a nebulous shield of something intangible here in your words! Brilliant!! Love it
Whoaaa that was so powerful!
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That is so cool. Well done.