Swimming in Blue
Marbles
The Rhythm
Of the intellect.
The thought of
Discharging knowledge...
Veering around
Into vulnerable
Teaching!
I opened my core and
Ripples of satisfaction
Entice my nature...
I closed
My presence
And Swim with
the illusion...
Creating vivid pictures
Of ambition.
A multitude of
Emotional turbulence
Envelop my nostrils...
I breathe the success!
Harder to relax as I'm
Closer to the hidden
Glories of the
Soul...
My Eyes Surfaced
In reality!
I lay there on the fluffy ambiance,
Awaiting for my mind
To return to me...
About the Creator
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
Your Mind is
A Wonderland of
Your Imagination
Make it Beautiful!
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Mariann shared with me a link to your YouTube where you read this. Have you thought of embedding a video into your post?
Love it 😍
I always finish reading a poem and have to sit with it for a little while for contemplation. A good read.
Oh yeah, hit it out of the park yes, excellent 👍👍
Powerful. This relates to me!!!
Beautiful ❤️
I feel a nebulous shield of something intangible here in your words! Brilliant!! Love it
Whoaaa that was so powerful!
Impressive 💕💖😊
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That is so cool. Well done.