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very sweet red and passionate
gives a warm chill everytime we meet
whether dipped in dark or white chocolate
makes me feel confident everytime i eat
much better when we are alone at night
every bite i take feels like a kiss
i'm on top like i was your favorite whipped cream
mixed with caramel and a honey filled twist
your sweet juices are dripping on me
a joy that i like to taste all day
fills me with joy and excitement with some ecstasy
i feel the sweetness of every dip coming down my way
every taste fulfills our fantasies
i dont know how much there is left
the sweet taste of a strawberry
has me catching my breath
About the Creator
Forest Green
Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy. I also appreciate tips, and would like my stories should be noticed.
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Comments (3)
Oh this was so refreshing! Wondering ode!
Sweet!!!
Mmmm! My mouth is watering! Lovely ode:)