Sweet and Sassy to her family and friends.
Wise in matters of staying out of dangerous trouble.
Everyone's favorite girl once they know her.
Everyone loves her beautiful, gorgeous smile.
Track star is what she is wanting to become one day.
Sixteen now, wow, where has the time gone to?
If you saw her, you'd fall in love with her beauty.
Xylophone she played in preschool.
Teen years soon left behind
Extremely curly hair, that she styles so beautifully.
Effortlessly, she makes science look like a breeze.
No one is like Kalli, she is one of a kind, unusually awesome.
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Happy Belated Sweet Sixteen to Kalli! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
This is a beautiful testament of love from a mother to a daughter. Although I've never been lucky enough to be a parent, I can feel the special relationship in every line of this poem. I can also well imagine it must seem like yesterday Kalli was a little girl banging on that xylophone, and now all of a sudden here she is - a track star, a beauty and a young woman! You must be so proud of her. She sounds truly special.