Today you are Sixteen
yesterday you were fifteen
to me, it seems like you were just born
between you and your sister, my love is torn.
The day I first held you
How tall you would be I had no clue
Your smile has always won my heart
It's like you have mastered a hidden art
You don't know how beautiful you are
You are my Superstar
I know you can not see it
but your look is unique you must admit
I know no one as brave
There's no animal you would not save
You have the kindest heart
Plus you are pretty darn smart
So today I wish you a wonderful Sweet Sixteen Birthday
While I remind you that I love you just as much every Unbirthday
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She sounds like a lovely young lady. She is also lucky to have someone like you to pen such a thoughtful poem for her birthday <3
This is really beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it. I would have to say this is one of your best poems. I'm certain your daughter must have loved it.
What a lovely way to honor your daughter. Beautiful Sharon.
This is just all kinds of lovely! 🤍 Such a sweet sentiment!
Happy Belated Sweet Sixteen to Bonn! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊