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Our favorite little distractions

By C.Z.Published 9 months ago 1 min read
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Dimples on a sweetheart, soft like marzipan

In dim lit rooms, reaching out and holding hands

Softly speaking lovely words, to win or to woo

The sweetest of all replies, the simple ‘I love you’

Raindrops washing away the dust from an old day

Afterwards inhaling the scent of gently disturbed clay

Colorful sunsets, colorless nights

To gaze upon the squirrels having silly little fights

In all the world these precious moments abound

Or distractions I suppose, if you prefer the sound

Nearly all of life can be distracting I’ve found

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About the Creator

C.Z.

A slightly inspired, barely motivated, lover of fact and fiction

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  • HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)8 months ago

    Incredible piece💖😉📝❗

  • Iris Harris8 months ago

    The first line hooked me too. 💖💖💖

  • L.C. Schäfer8 months ago

    The first line is so sweetly captivating, it draws you in and along 😁😁

  • Heather Hubler9 months ago

    Oh that last line...perfectly sums it up. This was wonderfully dreamy through the rhyme and wording but it had such an underlying substance to it. Really well done :)

  • Ruth Stewart9 months ago

    Such a tender poem. I enjoyed it. Well done. Thanks for writing this.

  • Denise E Lindquist9 months ago

    Great! Thank you.

  • Misty Rae9 months ago

    Beautiful and sweet. Well done, indeed. :)

  • Babs Iverson9 months ago

    Awesome!!! Superbly written!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Tiffany Gordon 9 months ago

    Beautiful work! 😊

  • Great work!

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