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Surpassed

A poem about being eclipsed

By Alison McBainPublished 2 years ago • Updated 2 years ago • 1 min read
Surpassed
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Elements of darkness and light

Carouse through empty rooms

Lingering in each doorway

Inspired by your absence.

Please don’t lie that you did this for me.

She is new and hopeful and loved, I know—

Everything I used to be.

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Alison McBain

Alison McBain writes fiction & poetry, edits & reviews books, and pens a webcomic called “Toddler Times.” In her free time, she drinks gallons of coffee & pretends to be a pool shark at her local pub. More: http://www.alisonmcbain.com/

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    Written by Alison McBain