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Subtle Karma

Anxiety of waiting

By C. H. RichardPublished about a year ago β€’ Updated about a year ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - February 2023
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Subtle Karma
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Once upon a time

A king betrayed his queen

Now sleeps eyes open

heartbreakperformance poetry
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About the Creator

C. H. Richard

My passion is and has always been writing. I am particularly drawn to writing fiction that has relatable storylines which hopefully keep readers engaged

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  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Wonderful ending poem πŸ‘Œ

  • Winner grace!!about a year ago

    super

  • Linda Rivenbarkabout a year ago

    So much said in so few words. I guess that reflects what life does to us all. I enjoyed the read.

  • Cathy Deslippeabout a year ago

    Perfection. Well done, and I enjoyed the read.

  • Jason Ray Morton about a year ago

    Well done. So much with so little.

  • Muhammad Sarib Aliabout a year ago

    Amazing story

  • Lauraabout a year ago

    Thank you for taking the time to share your story. Your words and experiences are valuable and appreciated.

  • CleverπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰CongratulationsπŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸ’•πŸ’œπŸ₯ΉπŸ’―

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Congrats on Top Story, Cindy! I love this one so much. :)

  • Tiffany Gordon about a year ago

    Very clever & well written! Congrats! 😊

  • Lewis Kimabout a year ago

    Or rather sleeps with one eye open πŸ’‘

  • Misha Kellyabout a year ago

    Loved this! Congrats on Top Story!

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Yay, congrats Cindy on a well-deserved Top Story! So happy for you!

  • Cendrine Marrouatabout a year ago

    Interesting haiku!

  • Kendall Defoe about a year ago

    My neighbor has a dog. She called it Karma. I asked why. She said, "Karma's a bitch". I do not sleep well now. πŸ˜³πŸ‘πŸ½

  • suman mohanabout a year ago

    Excellent job!

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    Congratulations! I’m so happy to see this one here!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Ah that Karma!! Loved the way this unfolded, wonderful. Congratulations on Top Story!!

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Excellent! Congratulations on top story!!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    yay. Congrats on the Top Story.

  • Loryne Andaweyabout a year ago

    Oof! Karma is a bitch. Congratulations on your Top Story! πŸ€—

  • Congratulations on your Top Story

  • Emily Marie Concannonabout a year ago

    Powerful words so much said in so few!! :) Congratulations πŸ‘

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    Nicely written. Good job!!!

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