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Strings

An inverse poem

By Natasha CollazoPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
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Strings
Photo by Sivani Bandaru on Unsplash

strings attached

leaving no

room to breathe

from the chill of the box you put me in

your control

detaching

my independence

telling me what to do

when I failed to please you

never thought I could be

free of your puppetry

sad poetryMental Healthheartbreak
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About the Creator

Natasha Collazo

Werewolf Writer

I get inspired at the mid of night

Stock market by day, howler by night.

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Jazzy 2 months ago

    Yes. I believe we all have been in a relationship like this where we are just glad to escape.

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Impressive and powerful!!@ Loved it!!!♥️♥️💕

  • This was extremely powerful! You go, girl! Freaking loved this poem! It worked so well both ways!

  • Breathe & be free, my friend, for you are indeed a wonder to behold in all your independent glory.

  • Lacy Loar-Gruenler3 months ago

    Powerful and bold, Natasha. So well done!

  • J3 months ago

    Yes, yes and YES

  • Shirley Belk3 months ago

    I love this...when a woman decides to flip a switch...watch out!

  • Anna 3 months ago

    Meaningful! I love it!😍

  • Rachel Deeming3 months ago

    Nice. Or rather not, depending on which way you reach it. What I mean to say is excellent.

  • Felt this! ❤️

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