Straw
The numbers don't lie

how many straws
does it take
to break
a camels back
and what kind of straws
do they come in a pack?
do they go straight on the hump
or will we need a rack
My Sharona
a hit for The Knack
a quick cheap reach
just to take up the slack
but we’re almost here now
so there’s no going back (camels)
and just like that
i went right off track
how many straws
will it take
to break
a camels back
how many straws
will really make
it snap, pop and crack
is there a limit
to how much
a camel can really hack
are there any records
so we can plot and track
we need to know exactly
how many will break the back
in order to be accurate
thought must be given to the stack
as we lay them one by one
upon the next camel’s back
not before long the last straw is placed
we will hear a clear and concise crack
the camel: inevitably, regretfully;
will proceed to collapse
suffocating under
an unspecified number of straws
and with a broken back
Atlas,
it is said
carries the weight
of the world
Atlas;
one world.
nothing broken
camel;
many straws
how many?
who can tell
why even make
a worlds to straws
ratio issue
dromedary spinal health
is both
a concern
and a goal
we quibble
whilst upon
the shoulders of gods
About the Creator
Bren
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