The Sixth Sliver Of Dark Poetry In This Series
This is my sixth dark poem for Dharrsheena. I tried to make it funny but it got pasta joke.
I think "Spaghetti" by The Dead South goes well with this poem.
You Bought This Strange Spaghetti
And Boiled It Mercilessly
And Drowned It In Sauce Like Blood
And Minced Creature For Your Food
Twirl, Eat, It Slips Down Your Throat
You’ve Not Given This A Thought
Spaghetti Crawls From Your Gut
Bad Pasta With Bad Intent
Twirling Round Your Throat And Lungs
Strangulation Is Its Fun
You Cannot Breathe, There’s No Air
This Is So Wrong, Is Not Fair
Fall To The Floor, Hit Your Head
Pasta’s Revenge, Now You’re Dead
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Lol You can truly come up with something where others see nothing. Bravo.
I like it and it does have humor😉🍲🧆
What an interesting and creative concept. Thank you for the fun read.
Lol! This was fantastic! Looks like he was an impasta 🤣 Beware of what you eat. I love this concept! Thank you so much for this poem, I appreciate it soooo much!