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Stormbreaker

A Poem

By Mara EdwardsPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Stormbreaker
Photo by Max LaRochelle on Unsplash

The air is turning brittle, a dry, yellow weight pressing down on the fields,
and the weather radio begins to stutter—not in a steady hum,
but in jagged, unpredictable teeth. Krr-ck.
A sharp rip through the gauze of the afternoon.
Then, a long, suffocating silence.

The clouds are bruised purple, belly-down on the hills,
bloated with a dark, curdled light.
You can feel it before you see it:
the hair on your arms rising up, pulled toward the sky by invisible threads.
It is a prickling voltage, a crowded, restless friction.
The atmosphere is snapping at its own edges.
Along the horizon, the air itself begins to fray,
dissolving into a fine, static mist that blurs the tree line into gray wool.

Suddenly, the screen goes wild.
The radar screen fractures into pixelated static,
green and red blocks scattering like panic.
Crossed signals.
Overhead, a low, tectonic rumble is choked out by the hiss
of immediate, localized electricity.
Sheets of heat lightning flicker behind the dense, charcoal canopy,
not as clean bolts, but as a dirty, stuttering neon glow,
illuminating the ribs of the sky through a veil of moving ash.
A wire somewhere is singing.
A fence line is buzzing with a stolen charge,
glowing with a faint, ghostly St. Elmo’s fire that licks the rusted barbs.

Snap.
The line drops.
The connection thins out to a white, blinding rasp.
Dust motes swirl violently in the copper air,
each speck catching the unnatural light like a tiny, burning circuit.
The leaves on the poplars flip upside down, flashing their pale, silver bellies
against the oncoming dark, mimicking the salt-and-pepper swarm of a dead channel.
It is the sound and sight of lightning before it splits the oak—
a thousand tiny, invisible sparks chewing through the distance,
leaving a bitter smell of ozone and scorched iron hanging in the throat.

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Mara Edwards

I am currently getting my Bachelors of Arts in English, and I have always loved writing and reading. I have loved my experience on Vocal and I can't believe I've already gotten to 80 stories (and counting).

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    Written by Mara Edwards