Stolen
My thirty-first dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena.
This is my thirty-first dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena, though more surreally scary than normal. This is a villanelle.
The music I have chosen is "Sleeping In The Devil's Bed" by Daniel Lanois from the LP "For The Beauty Of Wynona", a beautiful song, but thought the title fitted this villanelle.
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I Know You Believe I Love You
You Hear Voices In My Heart
Theyβre Stolen Souls, I Know Not Who
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On My Naked Chest, Thoughts Taboo
Never Want Us To Ever Part
I Know You Believe I Love You
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You Hear Those Voices. Girls, You Knew?
Are They Laughing? You Canβt Depart
Theyβre Stolen Souls, I Know Not Who
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Am I The Devil? Could Be True
You Canβt Believe That I Would Hurt
I Know You Believe I Love You
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Sink Into Me, I Turn The Screw
I Steal Your Soul, Pierce Your Heart
Theyβre Stolen Souls, I Know Not Who
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I Own You Now, Your Life Is Through
Dead To This World, Mine Is Your Heart
I Know You Believe I Love You
Theyβre Stolen Souls, I Know Not Who
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Comments (6)
Wow so so creepy but also so good!!
Omgggg, this was soooo creepy! A very well executed villanelle!
Super!!! Well done!!!
very nicely done
Oh wow, that's really well done!
You really do have the touch for this Mike.
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