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STAYS HOME

The Dialogue

By Babs IversonPublished 28 days ago β€’ Updated 28 days ago β€’ 1 min read
STAYS HOME
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My wife received a salary increase at her work.

Where does she work?

At the accounting firm across town.

Is that by the restaurant with the clown?

What does your wife do?

I haven't a clue!

Why would that be?

She is free.

What do you mean?

She stays home to clean.

We had to hire a cleaning lady.

Did you hire O'Grady?

Yep, but we eat out every night.

Our homemade meals are a delight.

My wife stopped cooking when she started her position.

Before we were married, my wife was a dietitian.

Why doesn't she work out side the home?

Because, she stays home.

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Babs Iverson

Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.

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Comments (20)

  • Denise E Lindquist24 days ago

    πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

  • This was genuine Babs! So clever

  • Priceless capturing. Well Babs well!

  • Sid Aaron Hirji27 days ago

    this is great performance poetry

  • Tiffany Gordon 27 days ago

    Clever & Well-written!

  • Andrea Corwin 27 days ago

    OMG too funny, I laughed and I love it!😍

  • D.K. Shepard27 days ago

    Home upkeep and family care is definitely plenty of a work load!! Great work, Babs!

  • Ameer Bibi27 days ago

    Thanks for giving this piece of writing today, as I was a bit sad but now after reading this I am feeling well πŸ˜ƒ

  • Kodah27 days ago

    Incredible Babs!! Love it! πŸ’ŒπŸ’“πŸ’

  • Fly Alone27 days ago

    Interesting and conversational...!

  • Hannah Moore27 days ago

    I kept losing who was talking here, but it felt like a seesaw trying to find balance.

  • Mariann Carroll27 days ago

    Humorous dialogue πŸ˜‚πŸ‘πŸ½β™₯️

  • Thant is a fun tangled conversation

  • Now I'm little confused about who is who πŸ˜… If you don't mind, could you please explain it to me? πŸ˜…

  • haha that was a lot of fun! so relatable too!

  • Lamar Wiggins27 days ago

    Lol, real life stuff. Great last-minute entry, Babs. I tried to finish another one, but it will not make it, πŸ˜”. Oh well, best of luck to ya πŸ˜ƒ.

  • shanmuga priya28 days ago

    It's hilarious...I loved it πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

  • Clyde E. Dawkins28 days ago

    Very excellent piece of performance poetry!!

  • Dawnxisoul393art28 days ago

    The back-and-forth dialogue reveals different perspectives and decisions made by the characters, adding depth to their relationship, it presents an interesting snapshot of their unique circumstances and the roles they have chosen, thank you very much for sharing, love your works, hope to read more, subscribed.

  • Joe Patterson28 days ago

    Nice job Babs.

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