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Scuttle Buttle Segue

whimsical waft waffle

By Brenton FPublished 25 days ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - June 2024

i'm walking sideways

like a crab

more shuffle

than step

a whole lot of buttle

in my scuttle

i'm reaching inwards

trying to find the source

of the things i don’t want

the things i don’t need

the things i don't like

the things i don’t heed

and the things you can buy

for a dollar

more dissonant reflection

the any real introspection

i'm hurtling backwards

at twice the speed of fright

and from where i stand

completely unplanned

i can see both day and night

i'm flailing, falling in a fashion

a spasticised backstroke in the air

my rate of descent should be alarming

and yet i don't seem to care

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Brenton F

I find it easier to bare ones soul than it is to provide a less than adequate bio

It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa

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Comments (15)

  • π‘πŒ π’π­π¨πœπ€π­π¨π§6 days ago

    "a whole lot of buttle in my scuttle". Oh yes! Great stuff!

  • Andrea Corwin 23 days ago

    Congrats on TS!! ❀️

  • Andrea Corwin 23 days ago

    Stevie Ray, oh yeah! "a whole lot of buttle in my scuttle" nice job!

  • Very rewarding to the mind, Thank you

  • Sounds like a country song with a bit of zang to it! πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘

  • Babs Iverson24 days ago

    Way cool!!! Loved it!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’•

  • Wow superb imagery ✨πŸ₯° Congrats on TS! πŸ₯³

  • Congrats on the Top Story!! I absolutely love the imagery in this!

  • Congrats on TS

  • Congrats, B...makes all the hard work worth it

  • ROCK 25 days ago

    Free-falling; feels good when you let your words spew! Very much liked this!

  • Enjoy the occasional free fall. Exhilarating

  • CHRISTIAN P25 days ago

    Nice work

  • Sasi Kala25 days ago

    Nice poem!

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