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Stars

After Poe's "The Bells"

By CatsidhePublished about a month ago Updated about a month ago 1 min read
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Stars
Photo by Kyle Gregory Devaras on Unsplash

Look up to the sky alight -

Starry night!

Darkness never ending, ebon pierced by twinkling bright!

How they sparkle, sparkle, sparkle,

Ever shifting out of view!

While the night becomes eternal

Through dark and loathsome miracle,

The lost sun cannot renew;

Stars are blind, blind, blind,

To the horrors that we find,

Their silent scintillation cloaks a forgotten world affright

With the night, night, night, night

Night, night, night

Oh, a world adrift forever in its blight.

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Stanza I of Poe's "The Bells" for comparison (thank you, public domain):

I.

Hear the sledges with the bells—

Silver bells!

What a world of merriment their melody foretells!

How they tinkle, tinkle, tinkle,

In the icy air of night!

While the stars that oversprinkle

All the heavens, seem to twinkle

With a crystalline delight;

Keeping time, time, time,

In a sort of Runic rhyme,

To the tintinabulation that so musically wells

From the bells, bells, bells, bells,

Bells, bells, bells—

From the jingling and the tinkling of the bells.

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Catsidhe

Pronounced Cat-she: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cat-s%C3%ACth

A public figure writing privately

Dark poems and fiction my specialty

Come explore the abyss with me

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  • 𝐑𝐌 𝐒𝐭𝐨𝐜𝐤𝐭𝐨𝐧about a month ago

    Interestingly, as I finished reading your microfiction piece, "Today is a New Day", your powerful final line made me think of Vincent Van Gogh (and I was even listening to "Vincent" by Don McLean as I read this poem). Spooky! This truly could have been written by Poe himself. Brilliant!

  • Night, night. It's time for me to go to bed, We have Easter sunrise service tomorrow morning. Evocatively poemed.

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Deep thoughts aptly shine in your poem. Shine on starry sky! 🩷

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