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Starlight Dance

a poem

By Bugsy WattsPublished 8 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - September 2023
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Starlight Dance
Photo by Erwan Hesry on Unsplash

We've been there,

in the velvet where the other planets

lay peacefully

nestled in permanent storms,

encircled in forever crowns.

*

We've been there,

on the dusty little rock

that pulls the vast oceans

as it whistles by,

super, harvest fixture

in the black night sky.

*

We've been there,

away from our home

or perhaps drifting

through places we belong,

ever expanding, ever careening

in the milky galaxy.

*

We've been there.

Though I am no astronaut

I have no need, for I see

the perfection in the universe

from right here,

dancing with you under the silent stars.

***

Thanks for reading!

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About the Creator

Bugsy Watts

Got bit by the writing bug.

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/bugsywattspoetry/

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  • Sarah D8 months ago

    Loved this! Read mine? https://vocal.media/fiction/an-irrevocable-dream-about-a-mermaid

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  • Harmony Kent8 months ago

    Outstanding! Beautifully written and expressed. Every word pulls me in and I'm living the flow you've created. Bravo, Bugsy 😊

  • Gerald Holmes8 months ago

    This is beautifully creative. It has a wonderful flow that drags the reader along effortlessly. Loved it and Congrats on the Top Story.

  • Paul Stewart8 months ago

    This is stunning, Bugsy! Love how buttery smooth the flow is and every damn word is well-chosen and slots into place. Magic. Congrats on Top Story!

  • SRenaS8 months ago

    Such a beautiful poem!

  • Ashley Lima8 months ago

    breathtaking

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  • Raihana H.8 months ago

    Beautiful! I liked how you wrote it, magical!

  • Dana Crandell8 months ago

    My favorite kind of moment. Congratulations!

  • Hannah Moore8 months ago

    Oh I loved this, so beautiful.

  • Test8 months ago

    Stunning-I can feel the magic as I read. Loved it! Congrats on top story also! 🀍

  • Iftekhar Shihab8 months ago

    nice

  • Lamar Wiggins8 months ago

    Ahh, my favorite pastime. You've captured it with a dreamy sensation of words. Well done and congrats! happy to subscribe.

  • Rachel Deeming8 months ago

    Just lovely. Romantic, magical, timeless.

  • Joelle EπŸŒ™8 months ago

    Congrats on the top story Bugsy, it’s much deserved ✨this was a beautiful poem

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