Star Eyed Gaze
A Haiku About Love
In the star eyed gaze,
Love is not the massive bang
It is the calm end.
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About the Creator
Meg
I'm here to explore the depth of human experience and to stop procrastinating my passion.
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Compelling and original writing
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The Dangling Bead
My life is splashing before my eyes, as I precariously suspend and prepare for the end, the consumption of my Self and identity. I know that gravity will be the victor in this struggle. Like a pendant, slipping from the chain, the tension has caught me in this moment, bestowing one last gift of reflection. I cling desperately, questioning my purpose. Searching for comfort. And I rememberβ¦
By Leslie Staven7 days ago in Fiction
Comments (26)
Wow, what a beautiful message within such a short format. Love. Love. Love.
Incredibly deep and meaningful for such brief lines. Well done!
the simplest words are the most poignant. Fantastic job!
Beautiful and Congratulations π πβ¨
Gorgeous poem
Very intensely emotional and poignant ππππ
Beautiful haiku. Well done and congrats on the TS
Brilliant!!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!β₯οΈβ₯οΈπ
So glad to see this on the main page! Well done on getting Top Story for this excellent lesson in brevity!
Truly beautiful! Wonderful job π€β€οΈ
Congrats. Quite beautiful π€
Great haiku.
Haikus don't get any better than this! Congratulations!
But the bang can be fun... ;) Great little TS here!
yes, so well done. Congrats on the top story
Beautiful. π
I love a perfectly executed haiku! Congrats on your TS!
nice post!
This was beautiful! Congrats on TS!!
Loved this. One of the best I have seen. In just 16 words you have told a lifetime of truth. Congrats on the Top Story.
The quick scene you crafted here lingers well after you finish reading it. Great work!
"It is the calm end" Loved that Meg β
I really enjoyed this!
Beautiful.
Wow, that was really, just wow. Beautiful :)