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Star Eyed Gaze

A Haiku About Love

By MegPublished 10 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - July 2023
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Star Eyed Gaze
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In the star eyed gaze,

Love is not the massive bang

It is the calm end.

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Thanks for reading :)

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About the Creator

Meg

I'm here to explore the depth of human experience and to stop procrastinating my passion.

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    Creative use of language & vocab

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    Well-structured & engaging content

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Annie Edwards 4 months ago

    Wow, what a beautiful message within such a short format. Love. Love. Love.

  • Incredibly deep and meaningful for such brief lines. Well done!

  • Bugsy Watts9 months ago

    the simplest words are the most poignant. Fantastic job!

  • Beautiful and Congratulations πŸŽ‰ πŸ’–βœ¨

  • Poppy 10 months ago

    Gorgeous poem

  • Melissa Ingoldsby10 months ago

    Very intensely emotional and poignant πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ž

  • Cathy holmes10 months ago

    Beautiful haiku. Well done and congrats on the TS

  • Babs Iverson10 months ago

    Brilliant!!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!β™₯️β™₯οΈπŸ’•

  • Paul Stewart10 months ago

    So glad to see this on the main page! Well done on getting Top Story for this excellent lesson in brevity!

  • Gina C.10 months ago

    Truly beautiful! Wonderful job πŸ€—β€οΈ

  • Chloe Gilholy10 months ago

    Great haiku.

  • Dana Crandell10 months ago

    Haikus don't get any better than this! Congratulations!

  • Kendall Defoe 10 months ago

    But the bang can be fun... ;) Great little TS here!

  • yes, so well done. Congrats on the top story

  • Mackenzie Davis10 months ago

    Beautiful. πŸ’œ

  • Alexandria Stanwyck10 months ago

    I love a perfectly executed haiku! Congrats on your TS!

  • Irfan Mustafa10 months ago

    nice post!

  • Jazzy 10 months ago

    This was beautiful! Congrats on TS!!

  • Gerald Holmes10 months ago

    Loved this. One of the best I have seen. In just 16 words you have told a lifetime of truth. Congrats on the Top Story.

  • Lamar Wiggins10 months ago

    The quick scene you crafted here lingers well after you finish reading it. Great work!

  • Dean F. Hardy10 months ago

    "It is the calm end" Loved that Meg ☘

  • Real Poetic10 months ago

    I really enjoyed this!

  • Jeffrey Sparks10 months ago

    Beautiful.

  • Heather Hubler10 months ago

    Wow, that was really, just wow. Beautiful :)

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