Stagnant Life
Flows in circles
Around time
Around progress.
Patience the virtue
So elusive
Wears thin.
The gain
Out of reach
Break the cycle
Break the Dam
Leave monotonous Life
Behind
Flow on and
Swell over the banks
Stagnant life rots
Away passion
Rots away time
And life
Rots what
Remains bit by bit.
Change renews
Refreshes
And reshapes the
Landscape.
Ebb and flow
Allows growth
And meanders through life.
Stagnant life
Is dull and grey
Reeks of stillness
Isolated pools
Dwindles in the sun.
Change the flows direction.
About the Creator
R.R.Hannaman
I have been writing a lot of stories and poems for a long time. It is nice to have a place to share it. I like to write about varying topics in my poem. I am constantly working on my world building and stories about my world Avaboya.
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This was fantastic! Very beautifully written!