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Spiraling

An Inverse Poem

By Meagan DionPublished 2 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
Top Story - February 2024
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Spiraling
Photo by Ben Blennerhassett on Unsplash

Darkness surrounding me

There's no

Light at the end of the tunnel

I can see

The world too heavy for my shoulders

No longer is

Hope flickering

Where I find

You are

I can't go on

Never will I say

I can be happy again

Because of you

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About the Creator

Meagan Dion

My life is a little crazy. Four kids, homeschool, write, create and coffee. Coffee is a verb. Do you coffee? I aspire to blow glass and finish / publish my novel. I would like to have an impact. Also, coffee.

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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    Well-structured & engaging content

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    Creative use of language & vocab

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    Writing reflected the title & theme

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    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

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  • Novel Allen2 months ago

    So well done. Congrats.

  • Anna 2 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story!!

  • I love how the lack of hope comes first, followed by hope. Very interesting! Congrats on the Top Story!

  • Dana Crandell2 months ago

    Congratulations! I enoyed this while coffeeing.

  • Congratulations on your top story. Excellent

  • Tina D'Angelo2 months ago

    Another homeschooler! Hello, my dear. This was so well done in both directions. During the long, dull days of being cooped up, remember that you will have a relationship with your children that few others get to experience.

  • olymoolla2 months ago

    You have written so many beautiful stories your story is admirable please visit my vocal id and read a story please

  • ROCK 2 months ago

    This was spectacular ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ I am a new subscriber:)

  • Mackenzie Davis2 months ago

    Oh wow, fantastic job!

  • Caroline Craven2 months ago

    Oh I love this.

  • Kendall Defoe 2 months ago

    Well done!

  • Amazingly done Meagan!

  • Hayley Matto2 months ago

    This embodied the challenge to the fullest!! Awesome work!!!

  • Mariann Carroll2 months ago

    This looks like a winner ๐Ÿ† Excellent work ๐Ÿฅฐ

  • Blake Booth2 months ago

    Wow! I loved how different it was reading from top to bottom. Powerful. Great job and congratulations on TS.

  • Test2 months ago

    Great job! Keep up the fantastic workโ€”congratulations!

  • Eiman Asif2 months ago

    Beautiful and lovely ๐Ÿ’•

  • Ashley Shiflett2 months ago

    Oh wow! Really well written inverse! โค๏ธ very beautiful as well.

  • Caroline Jane2 months ago

    This is so neat. It works so well and is beautifully elegant. ๐Ÿฅฐ

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    This is beautiful, and it works perfectly in both directions.

  • Beautifully & skillfully crafted, Meagan. Completely different perspectives depending upon the direction one reads.

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Fantastic!!! Terrific reverse poem!!!

  • sleepy drafts2 months ago

    Wow, Meagan! This is beautiful and masterfully crafted. I love this piece. It is so raw in the first reading and then beamingly hopeful in the reverse reading. Exactly the kind of read someone who is feeling this way might need. ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’“ Thank you so much for writing and sharing this piece, Meagan! ๐Ÿ’—

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