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Spider With An Unsettling Grin

Ekphrastic poetry of sorts

By Paul StewartPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
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Looks can be deceiving, like a spider with an unsettling grin

Smiles too can be deceiving, as they can hide evil and sin

Like the man with the puppies, sweets, and unsettling grin

He beckons you over, as he strokes his beard-covered chin

Promises he's kind and cares, flashing that unsettling grin

Your trust is what he wants, but his handshake hides a pin

Remember, looks can be deceiving, like a spider with an unsettling grin

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Thanks for reading. This is my first attempt at ekphrastic poetry. I was looking at some disturbing art (as you do) and came across this subtle masterpiece by Odilon Redon in 1881.

A symbolist charcoal drawing, this first struck me as odd for obvious reasons - it has 10 legs. Then I noticed that slight but very clear smile on the spider's face. Creepy, but very clever.

So I let inspiration take the wheel.

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Paul Stewart

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    Written by Paul Stewart