Sometimes Waiting is not Worth it
Haiku poem
By Diani AlvarengaPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
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You needed some time,
I respected your wishes,
Now, you prefer her.
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Diani Alvarenga
“I write to give myself strength. I write to be the characters that I am not. I write to explore all the things I'm afraid of.”
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Comments (9)
Oh my, Did this hit home
Yeah, you did a really great job with this one!
That's definitely heartbreak in a nutshell.
This is heart-felt! Well done.
Ouch, this one slapped. Beautifully done!
Oh my. That speaks volumes. Well done.
I'm sorry you had to go through this! Sending love and hugs your way 🫂❤ Wish you the best
Oh, my heart. :( I've been there. 😔 Sending you love❤️
💔 😞. Nice use of title here too!