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A Smooth Ride

By Just DanielPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
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A smooth drink like something you've never had before,

Drink too much and you'll end up on the floor.


Just one sip, just one shot

And you'll be left wondering

Was that alcohol or was that not?


Down the gullet,

emptying my wallet,

the sweet smooth juice

coasting down my throat

like water.


Fragrant and subtle,

Strong but quiet,

Smooth as silk passing down one's throat,

Like water rushing down the rapids

of a River.

This alcholic beverage

Will be a lifechanger.


Have it once,

have it twice,

have it with tons of friends,

it will be nice.

After all, it is made with rice.

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About the Creator

Just Daniel

I write short fiction when I have time. There are also elements of my life interwoven with fantasy that I incorporated into my writing. I also like the unknown, so enter into the dark, true, and mysterious if you dare...

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 months ago

    Oooo, this was absolutely smooth! Loved your poem!

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